Torch in the Dark Fount

 

Flynn struggled with creating meaningful narrative in his latest book, Torch in the Dark Fount.

    Liam carefully spread his own shawl upon….

    

Who? Why would he “spread” any shawl upon…? Delete…delete…

    Liam grasped his knife and savagely shred the silken shawl ….

A little better….type, type…

    Conor presented a fragile white crocus dipped in enemy blood to Warrior Queen Maeve. "The blood of  your enemies, my Queen...
"

Ah, much better, Finn decided.  With a chest filled with pride, he headed to his kitchen.

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He did not push save, something he would regret in a few hours.

Wednesday Words  were started by Delores until her computer fought with her. Words can be found on Elephant's Child. 

 

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This was from 2011.