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Saturday, June 14, 2025

Torch in the Dark Fount

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Flynn struggled with creating meaningful narrative in his latest book, Torch in the Dark Fount.

    Liam carefully spread his own shawl upon….
    
Who? Why would he “spread” any shawl upon…? Delete…delete…

    Liam grasped his knife and savagely shred the silken shawl ….

A little better….type, type…

    Conor presented a fragile white crocus dipped in enemy blood to Warrior Queen Maeve. "The blood of  your enemies, my Queen...
"

Ah, much better, Finn decided.  With a chest filled with pride, he headed to his kitchen.

He did not push save, something he would regret in a few hours.

Wednesday Words  were started by Delores until her computer fought with her. Words can be found on Elephant's Child
 
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This was from 2011.


14 comments:

  1. An interesting take. Words for Wednesday is a wonderful meme. I am so grateful to Delores.

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  2. Ah, Flynn, ALWAYS press the save button.

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    1. As you write, it has to involve a habit of pushing "save".

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  3. Yikes. Not pressing save is the worst mistake we make, isn't it.

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    1. Saving words that are absolutely awesome is important. they can never be found.

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  4. Its always best to edit our words, and there are many things I did not press SAVE and do regret it..

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  5. Oh Finn, Finn, Finn. And it was perfect too.

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    1. Of course, it was the best thing Finn/Flynn ever wrote.

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  6. So glad that things automatically save nowadays. Saves us so many times.

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  7. I lost 5,000 words once. That was a terrible day.

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    1. There is a sadness in the soul when that happens.

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