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Sunday, October 5, 2025

In Witch Creek the first dance

 

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Sun burnt sun
Streaked with
Gray and pink....
Wisp to wild.
Grasping, consuming.

Billows of ashes and dust
Swirl upward—
A gift to fires
Of all fires.

Witch Creek,
Cedar Creek,
Mount Palomar,
Esperanza: 

Burn to the ocean
Or stop at the crest?

Waiting for an end.
 
 
 
                          Witch Creek, San Diego, County, 2007

Impassive walls, lying and
Fiery tongues lick cold
 
Gusts transport feathery remains
of homes and trees

To rest, layer upon layer,
White and Gray.
Green life, now absent, 

Becomes moonscape
In moments, in hours.

All from
A sun burnt sun.


                            Fire at its witching hour from 2013.


 

12 comments:

  1. Love your poetry...not a fan of the subject! You do it credit with great imagery. Although fire has never been a direct threat but we were close; in Parker, CO during the Black Forest fire and in CA when the Sonoma fire raged.

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    1. Years ago I remember a Colorado fire that was sweeping around the landscape.

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  2. Fabulous fire photo, though I hope not too much damage was done. Good poem.

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  3. Susan, your poem is outstanding, to say the least. Between your words and the photos, you've described those wild fires perfectly. Blessings!

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    1. Seeing a fire from a distance is this horrible.

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  4. you are such a talented writer. the fires are horrid and that last photo hurts my heart..

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    1. Every year California has some awful fires. When, is the question.,

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  5. I shudder over the fires, though I delight in your words.

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    1. Being close to the fires is an incredible experience.

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