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Friday, January 19, 2024

Flying to Romance


 Sheila was not pleased. No, not pleased at all.

     Her BFF Brenda said that flying down to Florida in October would be a real hoot, and all the gang would be hanging around.  So Sheila, Brenda, Kimberly, and all the other damsels headed down to their winter spot in Florida.  “Eddie will be there!” Brenda had said. 
          
  So they went, and hit the water at high speed, skimming over the shimmering glassy pond, trying out new maneuvers, out-spinning the other.  It had all started so perfectly.  The dragons, including Eddie, were keeping all their eyes on the damsels as they made the first pass-by.  Brenda turned to give Eddie that coy look that said so much.

            That was her mistake.  Out from the depths of the quiet waters came a wide-mouth bass, and gulped her down in one smooth motion before sinking down into the waters.  Gone, just like that.  Brenda was gone.


                                                           
            The tragedy hit them all like a strong wind, and the damsels headed to the shade of the cypress at the edge of the water.  “What happened to her?!  Didn’t she see that one coming?”  Kimberly spoke bitterly.  She was always that way, so quick to speak, to judge the other damsels.  The others hushed her, while Sheila came to terms with the loss of her friend.  Kimberly was right.  Brenda knew better, but dammit, Eddie caught her eyes, and that was all it took.


            This was to be their season, their time to connect with the dragons and leave some larvae in the quiet waters.  Brenda let that get in the way of survival, and see what happened to her.  Sheila shook out her gossamer wings, and turned to face Kimberly.  

“Brenda was a fool.  We know that.  But, we have to watch out for each other, and we forgot that.”  All the lenses in her eyes scanned the water, the trees, the sky, the grass—looking for the predators that came so quietly.  “Now, let’s get out there, and do what we do best:  feast on mosquitoes and bugs, shake the air with our wings, and be the damsels we were born to be!”

            As if one, the damsels rose into the air, and skimmed down across the swamp grass, catching insects as their laughter rang behind them.

            Some dragons angled in to catch up with them.  Eddie grew level with Sheila, “Say, uh, Sheila,” he stammered.  “Awful sorry about Brenda.  She seemed a good sort.  Uhm, would you like to go over to the willow, and check out some lower branches with me?”  Eddie’s eyes glistened with deeper meaning.

            Sheila kept her course and eyes searching around, but she devoted a few lenses to observe Eddie.  He was attractive in that bad-boy way, and she could see what made Brenda focus on him.    She gave the matter some thought, and then gave him the only answer she could, which was.......

                              This was the photo used for the photo prompt.


This was one of the first blog posts I wrote  ten years ago. That anyone read it (12 people) with 3 comments surprised me. Just one of my silly little stories!



 

18 comments:

  1. you have mastered the art of fiction.. i had a couple of romances that ended like Brendas

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  2. Love that wild imagination of yours.... THANKS

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    1. I always enjoy writing, knowing that you will enjoy it.

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  3. That is so clever! Makes you glad there are no bass in dance clubs, lol!

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  4. I loved this "silly little story," Susan!

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  5. Well, it's not like Brenda was around to object anymore...

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  6. An excellent piece of anthromorphising.

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    1. Sheila was a strong minded damsel. Good luck, Eddie.

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  7. To seductively fly to the lower branches with Eddie trying to keep up. Eddie had ideas about Sheila. He only had eyes for her. She abruptly flew away. A large moth bass jumped up and grabbed Eddie in its mouth. Eddie forgot to pay attention because he was trying to catch Sheila. Sheila flew on her merry way happy that she had avenged her friend's death.

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  8. I'd forgotten the females were called damsels. Great story.

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    1. Makes one look at this amazing creature with more appreciation.

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  9. I'll think of this story every time I see a dragon fly! We had a single one that stayed way past summer here. I sure hope she made it to the sunshine state!

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    1. I hope she makes it as well. The Sheilas and Brendas tend to have short lives.

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