
This is not our daughter's tree. But if it lives more decades, it could be.
Standing at the window, I had gazed out at the back
lawn through a rare misty rain. The neighbor’s liquid amber trees were budding out, even while a few stubborn dried leaves clung to the
branches. The daffodils were nearing then end of their glory, giving up
the yellow gold that had bravely appeared when spring was just a vague
hope. There, at the back fence, stood the most resilient tree in this family’s fourteen years together: the loquat tree.
It had grown to nearly six feet, and the
new growth will take it even higher. That may not seem so spectacular,
but one needs to know its humble beginnings and its near-death
experiences to appreciate how amazing this tree is.
My daughter and her then-new husband had
purchased the tree during the early weeks of their marriage. They had
planted it in the narrow backyard of their first house. It was a
healthy, well-established tree, and the leaves were lovely and green.
They loved it, but their black lab, Shelby, loved it even more. That
dog loved it so much, that in just a few weeks, she had chewed the tree
down to within four inches of the ground. After that, Shelby must have
felt the tree was over and done with, and ignored it.
When they moved to a new house, my
son-in-law dug up the tree, while my daughter scoffed, “Leave it! That
thing is dead and nothing will revive it.” But, he re-planted it in a
half-wine barrel in their new backyard, where the loquat must have felt
safe enough to start growing a tentative trunk. When it was about two
feet tall, Shelby re-discovered it. Same fate, poor tree.
Shelby went to dog heaven, and my
son-in-law dug up the loquat tree. He re-planted it on the sloping
ground separating his house from the back neighbor’s house. Nothing
happened initially. However, I was looking out the window,
and saw a tree that I didn’t recognize. “Oh, that’s the loquat tree
that Shelby loved so much.” I was astounded.
Nature is resilient. People are resilient. We see it all over the world. I saw it in the backyard, through a rare misty rain.

This is a post from 2013... At that time, I waxed loquaciously in my writing. Now, I am pithy and in a short story feeling. Less words is more? As my hands hurt and my head is reluctant much of the time.
A lovely memory and story
ReplyDeletesome memories are stronger than others.
Deletethis is beautiful, the tree, the story and your writing. I have not had loquats since my childhood. My grandmothers sister, Aunt Fannie to me, had a tree like this, also orange, grapefruit, and 3 others that the name slips my slippery mind right now.. My writing skills have suffered from the last year and 4 months and I am waiting for it to slip back. Maybe yours will come and go, mine did. IF not we both have our blog to look back on and know what we could do. I am happy you reposted this to jog my memories
ReplyDeleteIT reminded me that I can write and will write.
DeleteWonderful story. God bless always, Susan.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it.
DeleteThat tree went through a lot. How big is it now?
ReplyDeleteIt is still about six feet but bushier. It produced a goodly number this year. It is still an amazing tree.
DeleteThat's an amazing story of tenacity on both your son-in-law's part and the loquat tree itself, Susan. Blessings!
ReplyDeleteTenacity is a great word.
DeleteI feel a love/hate relationship here.
ReplyDeletetrue.. Shelby loved beyond understanding, destroying the thing that he hated.
DeleteI think I'd have found a way to keep the dog away....
ReplyDeleteShe was a big strong dog and would have been hard to stop.
DeleteGreat story! I appreciate resilience, and that tree has it... Love sent from the first coast.....
ReplyDeleteResilience is something that nature needs.
DeleteI hope they are still eating loquats from this tree now and for years to come.
ReplyDeleteNow that Shelby is gone, they have Lucy who has a different personality.
DeleteI wonder what it was that attracted Shelby to destroy the tree twice.
ReplyDeleteWho knows?
DeleteOh, Shelby! Someday, perhaps, you can tell us the rest of the story.
ReplyDeleteI will put together some of the stories of her life.
DeleteI might have fenced off the tree so Shelby couldn't get to it. We have loquats here in the gardens, but the don't "belong" to anyone in particular so they don't get watered apart from rains. They fruit well, but aren't sweet (lack of water does that) so all the fruit is left for the birds and the rainbow lorikeets love them.
ReplyDeleteLoquats have a strange taste, true.
DeleteThis is just so amazing and a wonderful story. That tree is as enduring as their love for each other. And for Shelby, too!
ReplyDeleteShelby was a delightful dog. He just wanted to take down the tree, maybe?
Deletemy pure ,beautiful and amazing dear friend Susan ! thank you so much for sharing your old post .Each line rich with beauty and depth of life and it's wonderful experiences :) i was lucky to read it because through your short stories i could recognize the highly gifted writer who can write so effortlessly and soooo beautifully🥹❤️
ReplyDeleteit was shock to learn today about your parkinson my friend .I felt sad truly ! but my faith says that you have God on your side because of your innocent soul that shines through your writings and i believe that you will not give up because He will make you strong from within as He does to those who Love Him! May there be a way to get rid of this situation and may science bring some solution to resolve this ameen!!! i don''t know much about the disease but i know everything roots in our brain who sends signals to our body. i will look more details if regular meditation that strengthen our neuron and create new neural networks can help to reduce it to some extent .thinking of you my friend with love and prayers in my heart for you!
i LOVED this story and how it was written reminded me stories i have read in Urdu . When written from heart with emotions larger than life stories stay with readers forever !!! thank you so much for letting me learn that word " loqout " i heard and spoke numerous times in my village life was originated in your locality :) yes we back in village had many many loquot trees and fruits were delicious .Mother has planted one in the front yard ,but then she had to leave village with my younger sister and it was cut down by my brother's wife .thank you for brining lovely memories back :) sending loads of love and hugs!!!!
it was a delight to write. So good to hear and see your name. God has wrapped me in His arms and reminds me daily that He is in charge.
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