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Over
the years, Helen had dusted the shelves for her Great-Aunt Elspeth. At
first Helen could reach only the bottom shelf, and Aunt Elspeth had
praised her.
“Oh, what a magnificent job
you have done! Someday,” Aunt Elspeth had pointed to the very top
shelf, “you will reach that shelf! I will let you choose the bottle you
love the most!”
Each
time Helen polished and cleaned the shelves, she gazed at the bottles
so far out of her reach. ‘Someday…’ One time Helen would favor the
green bottle, but the next time she dusted, she desired the pink bottle.
Years
stacked up in numbers as Helen grew and she could dust the next shelf,
and then the next. Which one would she choose? The blue? The violet?
So lovely, so hard to decide.
When Helen could just almost reach that last shelf, Aunt Elspeth dropped dead right in front of her.
By this time, Helen was now grown as much as she ever would; she was a mother with a small child. As she closed the eyes of her now-deceased aunt, Helen smiled gently.
By this time, Helen was now grown as much as she ever would; she was a mother with a small child. As she closed the eyes of her now-deceased aunt, Helen smiled gently.
Then
Helen found a sturdy stool and a box. She stepped onto the stool and
stood level with the shelf. Gazing fondly at each bottle, Helen
sighed.
Reaching tentatively, Helen spoke, “One? Hell, I’m going to take them all!”
This is a repost from 2014. It came from the photo prompt above.
Reaching tentatively, Helen spoke, “One? Hell, I’m going to take them all!”
This is a repost from 2014. It came from the photo prompt above.

I hope she enjoys them. To the max.
ReplyDeleteabsolutely. She has dusted them all so often that she knows their value. Take' em all.
DeleteI'll bet the anticipation felt as good -- if not better -- than her final reward.
ReplyDeleteanticipation is part of her story.
DeleteI would take them all too.
ReplyDeletewhy not? Aunt Elspeth didn't need them anymore.
DeleteShe loved her aunt enough, I know she'll keep them safe in her aunt's memory. She earned them.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely as a reward.
DeleteYay for ALL, and Helen... good job doing all that dusting and waiting.
ReplyDeleteDusting is a chore, and Helen did her share of that chore.
DeleteI remember this story so well. I have always hoped that Helen inherited all from Elspeth but I have my doubts.
ReplyDeleteHelen settled for the colored glass.
DeleteGood for Helen!
ReplyDeleteBrave of her, but if the family wanted any belongings, they are too late.
DeleteShe had dusted them for a long time, I hope she enjoys them all :)
ReplyDeleteAll the best Jan
Oh, yes.
DeleteShe earned them. She should keep them.
ReplyDeleteShe deserves to keep them.
DeleteGood for Helen! Your stories always give me something to smile about, think about, or ponder about. Have a good week Susan!
ReplyDeleteI love thinking and then writing what appeals to me. Trees are incredible.
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