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Every Wednesday, Delores at Under the Porch Light tosses out six words for participants to play with, and often a sentence prompt.
This week her words are: absent vacant empty destiny eyes glaring, with
her sentence prompt:
a juvenile urge to run and hide overwhelmed him
Sometimes I write my take on the words in her comments and sometimes I will use her words to create a fuller post on a Friday.
| The Battle of Honey Springs |
I decided to do both with these words.
The sense of facing desolation and being alone--timeless themes throughout history present themselves. Battle fields are scattered around the world. Children are the ones who face the battles and who will fight them. History remains the same.
I did not start out to write something so dark, but somehow ended traveling there.
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Clara gazed across the empty
fields with vacant eyes. Her scarred and calloused hand shielded her
view from the glaring midday
sun. Is
this my destiny? She wondered.
Is this all I will ever do?
With that thought, Clara leveled her rifle at the enemy and
fired another shot. Another one down. She wondered absently. How many more to
go?
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This is let-words-flow, experimentation, whatever. I hope you will visit her site and allow yourself to experiment. After all, experiencing, playing with words,and writing are interchangeable.
You can access Delores' site by clicking on the peaceful flowing stream with yellow flowers in the right side bar.
Susan as always this is a wonderful take on Delores' Words for Wednesday. This makes me want to know more about Clara and what led her to this point. Is this a war she's fighting in? Ir is she fending off personal enemies. I want to know more!! But I s'pose good writing always makes us want to know more :)
ReplyDeleteThose are all great questions that I hope the reader will advance. I chose the name "Clara" because it is such a feminine and delicate name.
DeleteYou are so good at meeting the challenges. Love your writing.
ReplyDeleteShe sounds like someone not to be messed with
ReplyDeleteI think she has become de-sensitized to the death around her.
DeletePity those at the other end of her wrath
ReplyDeleteThe wrath she once experienced has now become cold blooded.
DeleteThose were great words to use in a prompt, and you did well with them!
ReplyDeleteI find myself somehow reassured when the words Delores give us takes someone else down dark paths. And console myself (a bit) with the thought that without the dark we don't see or appreciate the light.
ReplyDeleteI too would like to know more about Clara - her past and her future.
This is quite sad, wars and children just do not go together, yet too often it is children who fight them.
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