Yesterday’s post
discussed the importance of opposites
in creating tension within the writing.
In 1960s, Disney
released the film “Pollyanna” starring a then-child actress, Hayley Mills. The story line is: the orphaned child of missionaries comes to
live with her Aunt Polly Harrington, a wealthy bitter spinster who has an
iron-fist control over the town, of Harrington.
Pollyanna sets
about changing the town with her sweetness.
She falls from a window and is seriously injured; everyone unites and
become sweet people themselves; Aunt Polly hooks up with her old flame Dr. Chilton and she converts to sweetness. Sweet,
sweet, sweet.
I propose flipping
this movie on its head and creating an Oppositional-Defiant
Pollyanna.
The State Child
Welfare system places Pollyanna into foster care under her delightful Aunt
Polly. Pollyanna has been booted through
the system, after setting fire to one foster home and stealing the family
silver at another home.
Aunt Polly welcomes
the teen-age monster Pollyanna gladly, and the cheerful loving townspeople make
it their mission in life to help Pollyanna change. The character of Pollyanna undergoes a very
painful slow transition to niceness, but not before she steals the church
offering. When she is busted for buying
drugs, the kindly Dr. Chilton helps her into rehab where she discovers that
she is loved unconditionally.
Pollyanna tests the
town by driving Aunt Polly’s limo through the town square during a fund-raising
event to save the orphanage. Although
Pollyanna smashes all the charity booths, she inadvertently uncovers a devious plot to destroy the orphanage in order to build a Wal-Mart.
Pollyanna is the
hero, she is changed forever. She
marries the town doctor, Aunt Polly marries Reverend Ford, and Mayor Thomas is arrested for master-minding the Wal-Mart deal.
See the
change?! Doesn’t the presence of opposites improve the story
dramatically?
I rest my case.
| courtesy of Wikipedia, God bless 'em |

It absolutely improves the story, which still ends happily.
ReplyDeleteA happy ending with a little uncertainty is much more rewarding.
DeleteHahahahahaha Weeeeelll yes. I guess so.
ReplyDeleteAs I read it, I thought of another opposite. Did you see the academy awards when they did the song and dance to "I saw your boobs."
I actually looked up the YouTube on that one! Gave up on the Academy years ago.
DeleteI think a few of the females named were embarrassed. Hmmmm.
Oh, yes, your story is MUCH more memorable! Hilarious and believable at that:) Nice job.
ReplyDeleteI wonder what Hayley Mills would think of the altered version?
DeletePollyanna is a bit of a Buffy.
ReplyDeleteThere has to be a dark side for the hero, doesn't there?
DeleteAll that sugar... one needs other spices to make life taste good.
ReplyDeleteEven the sweetest desserts have salt added.
DeleteLOL wow going all rebel with a cause really adds an effect.
ReplyDeleteJames Dean has nothing on Pollyanna.
DeleteI'd buy a copy of that book :)
ReplyDeleteSo would I!
DeleteBrilliant - positive without being pukey. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI also like your version much better! Have you cast Pollyanna yet? Maybe Lindsay Lohan could play Aunt Polly!
ReplyDeleteJulie
I would pay to see this remake!
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