Still clutching the
parchment, Gunter held up his battle scarred hands and gazed at them against
the leafy oak and rowan trees. How many
battles had he fought? How many had
these hands slain?
Battles against
worthy opponents differed from the slaughter of peasants fighting to protect
their families. Gunter had done both,
willingly following the clan’s orders.
Vikings were trained from birth to be warriors who conquered, slayed,
and returned home triumphant.
The parchment in his
hands gleamed as sunlight glowed through it.
The colors of ink, the drawings done by a now-dead hand, and a silent
message in the strange letters—all intrigued Gunter. Why
does this parchment seem more precious than any silver goblets from the church
we destroyed?
Abruptly Gunter arose
as he stripped off the bloodied armor and reverently tucked the parchment
safely inside his linen tunic. Leaving
the sound and stench of the settlement behind him, Gunter strode off into the
forest. There had once been a monastery
some distance inland, one the Vikings had sacked years ago.
The sword lay
forgotten by the stream.
Maybe the answer will be there…
Gunter, the apostolic
barbarian, now searched for answers.
I like where this is going.
ReplyDeleteGoing to be a monk, sure could leave his sword in a funk. Interesting to see what answers he finds too, as we stroll along with you.
ReplyDeleteOh oh, maybe some retribution coming.
ReplyDeleteRead both parts. Great start. Stopping by from A-Z. Great to meet you. #391
ReplyDeleteI am not one to believe that one can dramatically change who they are, but maybe Gunter, maybe Gunter.
ReplyDeleteGreat post!
ReplyDeleteWhat will Gunter discover? Will he be welcomed?
ReplyDeleteThis is the stuff of a longer story after the A to Z is over. Sorry it cannot all be resolved just yet! Tomorrow...C-D, part 1
Oh, this is so intriguing. Captured my attention right away...looking forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteI see a book here. I can't wait for tomorrow's segment.
ReplyDeleteYay! So exciting - can't wait till tomorrow
ReplyDeleteLx
And the plot thickens...
ReplyDeletethis made me think of the old stained glass window i looked at in a salvage house yesterday----beautiful writing!
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my blog :) Good luck with the A to Z challenge.
ReplyDeleteHow suspenseful! What's on that darn parchment??! :)
ReplyDeleteCool! He's off on other adventures, perhaps of a more spiritual kind.
ReplyDeleteVery nice! I think ol' Gunter's about to have an epiphany...
ReplyDeletePearl
I hope he finds his answer!
ReplyDeleteHmmm...wonder what on that parchment?
ReplyDeleteOoooh! So good :)
ReplyDeleteSarah Allen
(From Sarah, With Joy)
MJ, Inger, Laura: I have the 'story/book' sketched out, but don't want to have it eat up the A-Z blogs. After...
ReplyDeleteMichelle, Lynn, Magnumlady: Best wishes on the A to Z blog. I am finding some wonderful sites.
Bish, PK, Pearl, G.E., Jay: The parchment does hold answers.
Sarah: Thanks!!
Because it IS more valuable!
ReplyDeleteShannon at The Warrior Muse
A great intriguing beginning. Gunter reminds me of my own Blake Adamson whose Mother's Bible holds meaning for him from the splatter of her own blood on the interrupted note she wrote him on its last page. Evocative and magnetic -- thanks.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for stopping by my blog. Your story captured my attention right away...I went back and read your A entry to get it in sequence. Good luck with the rest of the challenge!
ReplyDeleteYou are the queen of building suspense Susan.
ReplyDeleteJulie
I love the places you are taking us. Megathanks.
ReplyDeleteDear Susan, these first two postings in the A-Z challenge remind me of a novel I read last week: "The Book of Killowen" by Erin Hart. She is one of my favorite mystery writers and this book, the fourth in her series, is about the discovery of a body in an Irish bog. A body that dates back to the 9th century. And also about an illuminated manuscript from that time. You might enjoy it. Peace to you and Gunther.
ReplyDeleteInteresting concept. I like what you've done here. I don't know much about Vikings, but I always found them and that era rather interesting.
ReplyDeleteLee
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