Wednesday, April 4, 2012

D is Darkly Descriptive Desperation

Swirls of Satin


Dark.  


Deadly dark.   

 Doab Diamond crept through dredges of sludgy unseen sewage.

Walls of soot-blackened bricks crumbled beneath Diamond’s gloves. 

These, and more like it, await you!
 Not a molecule of light existed in this world. 


Even a brilliant torch would dot, blink, dot
out into utter blackness, relished by
resinous toxin.


Diamond removed a glove.  

Blindly his fingers combed through the atmosphere,  sensing that even the air was black.
red lace on black

He crushed the ether with a tight fist.  


 It oozed out as deleterious effluence, dripping
into a draining hiss.

 Razor-sharp grains of obsidian drilled through his ebony skin. 



Descend Demon Dragon
Desperate, Drear dug into the sludge blindly.

 “Have to retrieve…to activate it…before…”

 Before the Doom.

Before the Dragon.


I am absolutely addicted to alliteration.  The twists and turns of the tongue torture me.  Fighting forever ferociously to avoid anachronisms, the writer within writes on.

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21 comments:

  1. Whoa, this is really cool!! LOVE IT! So nice to meet you!

    I'm #222 on the A to Z linky list!

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  2. Chum, is it cheesy of this chick to chide you for choosing
    dreamy, deliriously delicious and wildly wonderful words that drive me to dive into the dictionary?

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  3. Alot of d's came due and wonderfully done. The dragon was of course my favorite.

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  4. What a lyrically inspired piece! A joy to read!

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  5. Eew! That was so deliciously drippily icky! I needed a shower to get the words off me. Well done!

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  6. Ooh what a fantastical piece of poetry. Loved it.
    Great A-Z post!
    Nutschell
    www.thewritingnut.com

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  7. Lizy--the rose is awesome, isn't it!
    Jess--I'll pop over to visit!
    Delores--mandarin oranges...this will be awesome for Easter.
    Zoanna--good to see you!
    Pat--Can't wait to see what you do with "D"!
    Brianna--nice to see your name!
    Stephanie--I know, the 'd' words are a bit dark.
    Luanna--'devilish'...didn't dream that one up.
    nutschell--Be popping over directly.

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  8. Simply Delightful. This one started me Dreaming of other days again. Thanks.

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  9. Oooh! Dark and broody!! :-)

    Pearl

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  10. Definitely dark. I love the black rose. Pretty.

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  11. YOU amaze me! This is sooooo good!

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  12. This was awesome! You'd think the big words would slow things down, but they were fluid to read and added to the overall effect. And I love well done alliteration.

    Shannon at The Warrior Muse, co-host of the 2012 #atozchallenge! Twitter: @AprilA2Z

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  13. So cryptic and foreboding! A chilling account of an underworld ...

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  14. That was definitely very dark. I like the picture of the black rose, there's something really poetic about that.

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  15. ooo nicely done. Liked the beat to the story as it slowly brought the reader down to the dragon with the character.

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  16. Ooh, that was deeply deliriously dastardly dark!

    AS for what's next for state testing, who knows. Those folks who make them up are in the dark!

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