Wednesday, September 7, 2011

Photo Write under 200 words!


The door swung open...Writers' Campaign

The door swung open to the restored old church, the home to Samuel and the adults. The Mommy dropped the groceries on the table and tossed Samuel into the playpen. “Be right back!” Mommy whisked out the door.

Samuel waited, listened. He had the time, the strength, and he could do this. Throwing the blue pacifier over the railing, Samuel hoisted his pwesuss whittl waygeess over the railing and did a practiced roll. With his hands up for balance, Samuel began the newly discovered walking power: stagger-stagger-wobble

‘Focus, man, focus!’ The words hammered in his 14 month brain. ‘Ignore the Cheerios under the couch!”

Samuel reached the spot where he nailed Grammie with projectile vomit. She was saying, “Gwamma wuvs dose pwessus whittle wegees…” Blaaaagh, and she stopped. Good times.

Almost there, Samuel pictured the freedom:  chase the kitty, taste the flowers, squish  mud. Such fine adventures, and he was almost there.

The Mommy swooped through the door and knocked over Samuel. She swept him up. “Mommy wuvs dose pwessus whittle waygees…”

Samuel tried to say, “Dammit woman! Can’t you speak the King’s English?” All that came out was a cry and some spit-up. The door swung shut.

10 comments:

  1. That's hilarious. Oh to be that young again :-)

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  2. LOL! Poor Samuel! Well, tomorrow is another day! I loved this!
    Blessings, Joanne

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  3. One of the most interesting, creative entries I've seen so far. That was very different.

    Lee
    Tossing It Out

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  4. I laughed out loud! Thank you for this as I take a break from work to laugh.

    As your first commentator said, What a hoot!

    Go, Samuel! Go!

    Peace.

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  5. Hi Susan!
    The door one is for Rachel Harrie's Campaign. BTW, yours is funny!!!

    I haven't even gotten to do 1st Writes' See Photo Write this week. It is a photo of skinned knees. I hope to get to it soon.

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  6. Lol love it. Makes me think of Stewie from Family guy. :-D

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  7. haha another baby genius who just can't get his point across, fun read.

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