Monday, June 2, 2014

Hidden


I cannot see in this light
Nor can I be seen.

Easing down domed sky
Light plunders.
Scanning ray not at play
Sweeping over and under.
In pursuit of hidden prey,
Which it will not find.

I am hidden.

So we will play this game
Round and round
Light will seek,
But I will not be found.






22 comments:

  1. Oh I like this Susan. Quite deep and mysterious. Hiding from the light, wishing not to be found. Ah but every once in a while a ray slips through and we think to ourselves "this is the ray of light I have been waiting for"...

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  2. A nice place to be to get away, but still waiting for that light to shine on through

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    1. when the sun gets low enough in the sky, perhaps it will reach the dark places.

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  3. What a lovely old brick floor.

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    1. That floor took some time and talent. Not every mason would/could do that.

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    1. that is a a great expression of your determination.

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  5. Oh my. I have been there, and still spend a little too much time there.

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    1. It is an exquisite shot, so inviting.

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  7. Is this a riddle? I was picturing a lighthouse. Can't figure what the place in the photo is. Looks like someplace in Europe.

    Lee
    Tossing It Out

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    1. I think it is in Italy or someplace like that. It is inviting.

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  8. This is nice writing, and I like the picture. It looks like a peaceful place to have a sit.

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    1. I too love this site. Hope readers check this photographer.

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  9. I like the dark, I like darkness, but I don't like to hide.

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    1. Hiding is sometime what we all do at one time or another. Creatures hide all the time.

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  10. Sounds like a game of cat and mouse, light and shadow, here and there, then and now.

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    1. Very good!! An enigma of opposites!

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